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What You Get From a Fictionary StoryCoach

StoryCoach provides a brand new way to visualize your story and finish your novel. Along with a summary letter, you'll get a complete package of editorial advice.

  • 38 Fictionary Story Elements Evaluated
  • Editorial Notes per Scene
  • Track Changes and Inline Comments
  • Tailored Writing Advice
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Purpose

There must always be a reason why any given scene exists in your story. A scene without a purpose will distract the reader from the main story. It may even bore the reader. If a scene doesn't drive the story forward, then ask yourself why it’s even in your novel.

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Scene Impact on Protagonist

What does the protagonist feel as a result of what happens in the scene. The protagonist might not be in the scene but could still be affected by the scene.

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Sounds

Sounds will help the reader “hear” the scene as it play out.

38 Fictionary Story Elements

Story Elements are the key to a comprehensive edit. Based on extensive research, we've chosen the most important story elements needed to tell a powerful story.

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I loved working with Kristina and StoryCoach. Her notes were spot on. Her reassurance was the extra boost I needed…

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Kristina’s approach to editing has improved the flow and quality of my story beyond measure.

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Saving Nina

Fictionary Author

Kristina pointed out where things didn't work and gave helpful suggestions. I wouldn't hesitate to use Kristina's editing skills again.

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The Egnimatic Door

I got good value for money... Improvements were mainly in character arc, missing ingredients in scene structure, and potential reader…

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Knights of the Air

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Fictionary has been amazing in helping me edit the scenes and plot of my latest work in progress! The streamlining…

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Ellen Kirkpatrick

Kristina's insights were so valuable and Fictionary has helped me turn my draft into a polished piece.

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