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Testimonials From StoryCoach Clients

Skinner Myers, Fictionary Author

I loved working with Kristina and StoryCoach. Her notes were spot on. Her reassurance was the extra boost I needed…

Skinner Myers, Author & Film Maker

Jim Crow

Veronica Ventura StoryCoach Client

Kristina was the first editor who was genuinely invested in my book, and I recommend her services above all others.

Veronica Ventura, Author

Ryder Stephens

Charles Oakley, Fictionary Author

Kristina’s approach to editing has improved the flow and quality of my story beyond measure.

Charles Oakley, Author

Saving Nina

Fictionary Author

Kristina pointed out where things didn't work and gave helpful suggestions. I wouldn't hesitate to use Kristina's editing skills again.

Shirley Arnham, Author

The Egnimatic Door

I got good value for money... Improvements were mainly in character arc, missing ingredients in scene structure, and potential reader…

Iain Stewart, Author

Knights of the Air

Alva Eriksson

Fictionary has been amazing in helping me edit the my latest work in progress! The streamlining has cut my editing…

Alva Eriksson, Author

Ardent

Ellen Kirkpatrick

Kristina's insights were so valuable and Fictionary has helped me turn my draft into a polished piece.

Ellen Kirkpatrick, Author

Brew Books

What You Get From a Fictionary StoryCoach

StoryCoach provides a brand new way to visualize your story and finish your novel. Along with a summary letter, you'll get a complete package of editorial advice.

  • 38 Fictionary Story Elements Evaluated
  • Editorial Notes per Scene
  • Track Changes and Inline Comments
  • Tailored Writing Advice
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Date / Time

The quicker the reader catches on to the timing, the quicker you'll draw them into the scene.

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Conflict

Conflict is the action that is actually happening in a scene. A physical fight, an argument, a battle to win a race. For this scene element, describe the conflict in the scene.

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POV Goal Related to Plot

Linking the goal to the plot will make your characters believable, enable you to trim scenes, and help you intensify scenes.

38 Fictionary Story Elements

Story Elements are the key to a comprehensive edit. Based on extensive research, we've chosen the most important story elements needed to tell a powerful story.

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